Michelle Hyland
is my mum want to the athens olympics it was amazing and this is same of my writing about my mum when she went to the athens olympics.
Thursday, 12 August 2021
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Kia Ora Jakob,
ReplyDeleteI love your wow fact! It’s so neat that your mum’s Michelle and you can share with all of us that she went to the Olympic games in Athens and represented New Zealand.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more information about her childhood or adulthood to make your writing stronger. Can't wait to see who your next report will be on.
Mā te wā
Miss Mikayla.
Kia Ora Jakob,
ReplyDeleteWow, that is such an stunning fact that your mum represented NZ!
You must be so proud of her!
Next time you could make the image or words bigger so it's easier to read.
Mā te wā
Catalina
Hola Jakob,
ReplyDeleteWell done for acting on the feedback you have been getting and improving your report. I like how you have included both reports so people can see you turbo charging your learning and making it even better. They can see the changes and differences you have made. Well done.
Keep up the great mahi.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden